Friday, November 20, 2009

Im sorry....Heres some more work

I have some terrific new. Besides the fact that I am back online now...YAY! I have been working on my book. My computer has crashed a couple times on me but not to fear all of its backed up on the oooold noodle..lol....but I am sorry to those who have been reading and to the question of yes I am all good now, resloved my problem with that so called best friend and friend of mine. Im just choosing to stay away untill graduation. I have a book Im working on for 4 or so years. Angels Blessing voices from the past...Its coming along nicely and all I hope its good enough to be published soon :-)

Here is a little excerpt of what its all about.

Daniel felt his lungs slowly convulge as he gasped for air. Running threw sand was like running threw water, you worked hard but got nowhere quick. He looked ahead at Carmen and gave a frustrated grunt. She made it look so easy! But no time to simmer as another explosion sounded behind them. "COME ON LININN MOVE IT!" Carmens voice reached behind him and he tried to move with all his might ahead. Looking back was an instant mistake. A huge mongeled horde of captors looked back at them. Cutlasses drawn and waving as to catch them. They were quickly drawing closer and closer with every passing second. Daniel kicked into high gear and started to spead further and further until her was neck and neck with Carmen. Her amber hair flagged around her like a halo as he eyes kept peircingly to the horizon. She never missed a beat though while Daniel did, tripping every which way with the wind blowing sand in their faces. Blindly running to the peir as to seak a ship soon going out to sea, anything to get away. "We can't fight them here." Carmen had exclaimed to him before he even had a chance to get into a fighting position. He knew she was right, if they did it would spell disaster beyond what they could imagine.

Time was on their side as they saw a ship in the distance from the port. Its sails were up, it was about to leave! Finding new inspiration was here and Daniel kept going on, his legs and arms felt far to heavy for him now. His lungs screamed for him to stop but he knew it would be his doom if he did. He felt his body slow and Carmens firm hand on his back, she had slowed to push him on. In the distance he could see the steps yo port and to the ship. The last hand was boarding and with it, Carmen and Daniel.

"We made it!" He sighed and weeazed. Wiping away the sweat from his face he looked down, the boarding plank had been drawn and he beamed down at the angrey faces. Town officials mostly, but he was glad to be at sea again, nothing was more familiar than the spray of the sea, he had taken to it quickly, almost like a long lost calling. He smiled and looked around, whiching to take cover. Being out in the open on a strange ship was anything but wise.

"Now to find our Anne." Carmen sighed leaning on the railing, wiping her hair from her face. Daniel had almost forgotten why he had come here in the first place. To find the illustrious Anne Bonny of the Caribbean. She held the key to not only their lives, but their future. "Where should we start?"

"How about right here?"

Turning in surprise, Daniel and Carmen both came face to face with Anne bonny. Her Raven black hair flowed around her shoulders with her emerald green eyes sharper than any sword forged in all the seven seas. Daniel felt his knees buckled from his endevor before, but he refused to fall, he needed to make sure if he needed them before they were thrown off the side of her own ship.


..............................to be continued.....................................


Hope you all like this one. I worked on this for a while, I need to do some historic checking before I do anmything else. But I hope everyone com,ments on it, tell othersd need more readers and cant wait to hear from all of u SEE YA! :)

1 comment:

beanizer_05 said...

..wow..a writer..keep writing..m silently following ur posts..keep dem coming:)